Submission Package: $650.00 (Flat Fee)

• Written critiques of your Query Letter, Synopsis (up to 1,200 words), and First Pages (up to 5,000 words).

• Margin notes and in-line edits on the effectiveness of your opening chapters, as well as feedback on character and plot development.

• Note: This is a one-time critique service that does not include additional assessments of revised material, but follow-up questions are encouraged.

Editorial Assessment (Full Manuscript Service): EMAIL FOR A QUOTE

Recommended for writers with a finished 1st or 2nd draft looking for Big Picture feedback on readability and direction.

• Editorial letter focusing on strengths and weaknesses of the full manuscript, including feedback and revision suggestions on character development, world-building, plot development, pacing, structure, and writing.

• A full in-line manuscript edit is not included in this service.

• Includes follow-up questions and assessment of your revised first chapter.

Developmental Edit (Full Manuscript Service): EMAIL FOR A QUOTE

Recommended for writers with a finished manuscript ready for deeper feedback (e.g. deciphering/applying feedback from agents, getting submission-ready, pre-publication polishing, etc.).

• Editorial letter focusing on strengths and weaknesses of the full manuscript, including feedback and revision suggestions on character development, world-building, plot development, pacing, structure, and writing.

• In-line revision suggestions on how to improve your writing on the sentence level, how to enhance your current strengths, and how to address any weaknesses in a way that best fits your own vision for the project.

• Chapter-by-chapter margin comments on the manuscript and occasional line editing where appropriate. [Note: This does not include a full copyedit.]

• Includes follow-up questions and assessment of your revised first three chapters.

Book Doctoring (Full Manuscript Service): EMAIL FOR A QUOTE

A cross between developmental editing and ghostwriting. Ideal for writers with a finished manuscript seeking a more collaborative service (with less heavy lifting) in which I take your novel from story development, beyond the editorial letter, and through the first revision.

• Phone or email consultation/introduction.

• Round 1: Full Developmental Edit + detailed outline, Big Picture editorial letter.

• Follow-up phone call to discuss editorial direction and notes.

• Round 2: Application of agreed-upon edits, sentence-level line editing + new editorial letter offering remaining direction and final comments.

• Phone or email debrief.